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{{quote|1952?? This is 1952?!? Holy Shit!! You know what this means? I've gone back in time 30 years! 30 goddamn years!!! I haven't even been born yet!|Marty McFly, noticing a calendar while at Wilson's Cafe}}
The '''first draft screenplay of ''[[Back to the Future]]''''' was written in [[1980]] by [[Robert Zemeckis]] and [[Bob Gale]]. It was very different from the final movie version.
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The '''first draft screenplay of ''[[Back to the Future]]''''' was written in [[1980]] by [[Robert Zemeckis]] and [[Bob Gale]]. It was very different from the final movie version. It should be noted that the time machine was not conceived to be the [[DeLorean time machine]], as the [[1981]] [[DeLorean DMC-12]] did not appear on roads until the next year.
 
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==Similarities==
 
==Similarities==
 
*The first draft opens similarly to the opening of the [[Back to the Future novelization|''Back to the Future'' novelization]], with an appearance by [[Mr. Arky]].
 
*The first draft opens similarly to the opening of the [[Back to the Future novelization|''Back to the Future'' novelization]], with an appearance by [[Mr. Arky]].
 
*Doc is here known as "''Professor'' Emmett L. Brown". Marty however calls him "Prof" instead of "Doc".
 
*Doc is here known as "''Professor'' Emmett L. Brown". Marty however calls him "Prof" instead of "Doc".
*Marty wanted to use the time machine for financial gain, as he attempts in ''[[Back to the Future Part II]]''.
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*Marty wanted to use the time machine for financial gain, as he attempts to do in ''[[Back to the Future Part II]]''.
 
*[[Biff Tannen]] exists in this draft.
 
*[[Biff Tannen]] exists in this draft.
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*Wilson's Cafe would later separate to become [[Goldie Wilson]] and [[Lou's Cafe]].
   
 
==Major differences==
 
==Major differences==
*The present is '''1982''', not [[1985]].
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*The present is [[1982]], not [[1985]].
*[[Hill Valley]] '''does not exist''', only a place described as a "small Midwestern town".
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*[[Hill Valley]] does not exist (i.e. it is never named), only a place described as a "small Midwestern town".
*The '''time machine is a refrigerator''', and is powered by the "'''Power Converter'''".
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*The time machine resembles a refrigerator, and is powered by the "Power Converter". (This idea was dropped because of the fear that children would imitate what they saw on-screen and lock themselves inside refrigerators.)
*Professor Brown lives in an '''abandoned Orpheum theater'''.
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*Professor Brown lives in an abandoned Orpheum theater instead of the [[Doc's garage|garage]] that is his home in the final version.
*Professor Brown has a '''monkey named Shemp'''.
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*Professor Brown has a pet chimpanzee named Shemp instead of a [[dog]].
*Marty's girlfriend is '''Suzy Parker'''.
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*Marty's girlfriend is Suzy Parker.
*Marty is a '''video pirate''' alongside an aspiring musician.
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*Marty is a streetwise video pirate alongside being an aspiring musician, and is running a secret black market operation alongside Professor Brown. (The studio had refused to make a film where the hero was a video pirate.)
*Marty's mother is '''Eileen Baines''' and lives in the same house as Marty in 1952.
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*Marty's mother is Eileen Baines and lives in the same house as Marty in [[1952]].
*'''Government agents''' shoot Professor Brown.
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*Government agents shoot Professor Brown.
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*Instead of capturing Professor Brown's demise via a [[JVC camcorder]], an audio tape recorder is used (granted home video cameras were in short supply in [[1980]]).
*Marty travels back to '''March 11, 1952'''.
 
*Marty's alias is "'''Marty Lewis'''", perhaps a reference to [[Huey Lewis]].
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*Marty travels back to [[March 11]], [[1952]].
*Biff's catch phrase is "'''A-hole'''" instead of "[[butthead]]".
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*Marty's alias is "Marty Lewis", perhaps a reference to [[Huey Lewis]].
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*Brown got his 'revelation' when, at a party, a girl hit him on the head with a bottle.
*The dance is named "'''Springtime in Paris'''" instead of "[[Enchantment Under the Sea]]".
 
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*Biff's catch phrase is "a-hole" instead of "[[butthead]]".
*George and Lorraine meet in the '''high school cafeteria''' where he attempts to ask her out. He spills creamed corn.
 
 
*The dance is named "Springtime in Paris" instead of "[[Enchantment Under the Sea]]".
*The way Marty returns to [[1985]] is '''via a nuclear test in Nevada'''.
 
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*The all-black band is Lester Moon and the Midnighters.
*When Marty returns to 1982, he discovers that his father has become a '''boxer'''.
 
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*The song that George McFly and Eileen (who would be renamed [[Lorraine Baines McFly|Lorraine]] in the final version) have their first kiss with is "Turn Back the Hands of Time", though Marty still plays "[[Johnny B. Goode]]" afterward, albeit with a segue into "[[Rock Around the Clock]]".
 
*[[George McFly|George]] and Eileen meet in the high school cafeteria where he attempts to ask her out. He spills creamed corn.
 
*The way Marty returns to [[1982]] is via a nuclear test in Nevada. (It was considered too expensive to go on location.)
 
*When Marty returns to [[1982]], he discovers that his father has become a boxer.
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*Marty has an unnamed elder brother who has left home, but he does not have a sister.
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==Behind the scenes==
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*In a question and answer session at USC, Zemeckis and Gale stated that they had more than 40 rejection letters from studios that had considered and turned down the script.
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*Because it took four years to get the film made, the script was revised several times, and the story and screenplay perfected to become the number one film of [[1985]].
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*''Back to the Future'' is one of the few films where early drafts of scripts are available for study, warts and all. The original first draft can be viewed at [http://www.bttf.com BttF.com], in that Gale and Zemeckis authorized to be imaged and made available online.
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*The government agents who shot Professor Brown in the original script are called [[Reese]] and [[Foley]]. They appear in ''[[Back to the Future II]]'' as the two [[Hill Valley Police Department|police]] officers in [[2015]] who take [[Jennifer Parker|Jennifer]] [[McFly residence (2015)|home]].
   
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==External links==
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*[http://www.kristensheley.com/bttf/future.html KristenSheley.com]
 
[[Category:Draft screenplays|BTTF1 1]]
 
[[Category:Draft screenplays|BTTF1 1]]

Revision as of 14:26, 14 August 2020

"1952?? This is 1952?!? Holy Shit!! You know what this means? I've gone back in time 30 years! 30 goddamn years!!! I haven't even been born yet!"
—Marty McFly, noticing a calendar while at Wilson's Cafe

The first draft screenplay of Back to the Future was written in 1980 by Robert Zemeckis and Bob Gale. It was very different from the final movie version. It should be noted that the time machine was not conceived to be the DeLorean time machine, as the 1981 DeLorean DMC-12 did not appear on roads until the next year.

Similarities

Major differences

  • The present is 1982, not 1985.
  • Hill Valley does not exist (i.e. it is never named), only a place described as a "small Midwestern town".
  • The time machine resembles a refrigerator, and is powered by the "Power Converter". (This idea was dropped because of the fear that children would imitate what they saw on-screen and lock themselves inside refrigerators.)
  • Professor Brown lives in an abandoned Orpheum theater instead of the garage that is his home in the final version.
  • Professor Brown has a pet chimpanzee named Shemp instead of a dog.
  • Marty's girlfriend is Suzy Parker.
  • Marty is a streetwise video pirate alongside being an aspiring musician, and is running a secret black market operation alongside Professor Brown. (The studio had refused to make a film where the hero was a video pirate.)
  • Marty's mother is Eileen Baines and lives in the same house as Marty in 1952.
  • Government agents shoot Professor Brown.
  • Instead of capturing Professor Brown's demise via a JVC camcorder, an audio tape recorder is used (granted home video cameras were in short supply in 1980).
  • Marty travels back to March 11, 1952.
  • Marty's alias is "Marty Lewis", perhaps a reference to Huey Lewis.
  • Brown got his 'revelation' when, at a party, a girl hit him on the head with a bottle.
  • Biff's catch phrase is "a-hole" instead of "butthead".
  • The dance is named "Springtime in Paris" instead of "Enchantment Under the Sea".
  • The all-black band is Lester Moon and the Midnighters.
  • The song that George McFly and Eileen (who would be renamed Lorraine in the final version) have their first kiss with is "Turn Back the Hands of Time", though Marty still plays "Johnny B. Goode" afterward, albeit with a segue into "Rock Around the Clock".
  • George and Eileen meet in the high school cafeteria where he attempts to ask her out. He spills creamed corn.
  • The way Marty returns to 1982 is via a nuclear test in Nevada. (It was considered too expensive to go on location.)
  • When Marty returns to 1982, he discovers that his father has become a boxer.
  • Marty has an unnamed elder brother who has left home, but he does not have a sister.

Behind the scenes

  • In a question and answer session at USC, Zemeckis and Gale stated that they had more than 40 rejection letters from studios that had considered and turned down the script.
  • Because it took four years to get the film made, the script was revised several times, and the story and screenplay perfected to become the number one film of 1985.
  • Back to the Future is one of the few films where early drafts of scripts are available for study, warts and all. The original first draft can be viewed at BttF.com, in that Gale and Zemeckis authorized to be imaged and made available online.
  • The government agents who shot Professor Brown in the original script are called Reese and Foley. They appear in Back to the Future II as the two police officers in 2015 who take Jennifer home.

External links